Entry 8

I've finished my Analysis, and read the story several times over, making small changes in vocabulary and rhythm. Its flowing alot better than it originally did. I decided the title of the story is going to be "Ascension Mine." Ascension being a word the elevator says, near the end of the story. This title has a double meaning. Ascension Mine as in- A possible name of the Mine, or the idea that Trent is Ascending from the Mine at the end. And Ascension Mine as in- The Ascension is mine, MY Ascension, or Trent's Ascension. All in all, I think it makes a nice little package. I raise the tension to an acceptable level at the end, reveal a small amount of the Alien etc, everything seems to fit. Now Im just going to list my references, and I'm done :)